Wow, the imagery in this poem is amazing; so is the structure and the rhyme. It simply reaches utmost perfection. By the way, thank you so much for your comment, I greatly appreciate it. Also for the line you had suggested, adding it made the poem sound much better. I thank you for that. Keep up your great work! 5/5

Wow, that was brilliant imagery, really quite beautiful. Wow wow and wow again. nice job hun.

-Tainted Mikochan

The imagery, the structure, the rhyme...it's all flawless. Inspirational work, you obviously have a great talent, this is one of the best nature poems I've seen on this site. Magnificent stuff, really amazing, 5/5 x

Wow this is very good! It is very well described.. I could just picture it in my mind. And also the flow & rhthm was great & really helped in making the poem excelllent. Great job! Keep up the good work! 5/5**

Paints a beautiful picture...so many amazing word choices...Great Job Hun....
Emma 5/5

I really would suggest that you never stop writing and that you try to get some of these published. You're probably the second person I suggested that to on the site out of all the poems I've read because there's just something about your writing that captures everything and not just what you're writing about. You gave these flowers human like qualities that seemed to fit them as if they really did have their own personalities.

This is an amazing poem, I love it. I really enjoyed reading it, I can picture the garden. It has beautiful descriptions, and all the words that you used are perfect.

Great job! 5/5
Keep writing.

Wow.. this was very good, and it almost won a place in my contest, if there were more places, you definetely would be on them! great job on this poem, the descriptions were amazing, it flowed well, and it was just so peaceful, i could really imagine myself there! brilliant job! 5/5

Wow!!!! when i read this poem it was like i was there!!!!! you described it really good!!!!!!!

xoxoxox
JESSiE

Your words leave a beautiful picture in my mind. When reading this, I feel as if I'm sitting in this garden, and the flowers, which you describe so perfectly, are dancing around me and singing to me the song of their beauty.

one of my favorites.

Rave.

Wow. this was particularly descriptive. excellent work! 5/5

*stares in awe* I couldn't write that of an amazing poem if someone threatened me with a gun O.o *is in love with you talent*
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