Wow..this poem was great
i LOVE this part:
When I have folded,
Like paper with creases.
Be my escape...
&& pick up my pieces...
*great work
--miranda

This is a really good poem.. great write 5/5 I loved it

Great Poem
Not good topic
Nope its a bad topic
No poems should be about u dien
but it was greatly written
5/5

I like this poem, but when I'm reading it because of the double and symbols I actually say and and, I think it removes from the flow a bit, and I don't really see the point. Great poem though, keep up the good work. It's awesome.

"When I have folded,
Like paper with creases.
Be my escape...
&& pick up my pieces..."

I don't think folded paper is ripped really.

Sorry!

I love this poem. and can COMPLETELY relate.

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amazing job. i love you. talk to me when you need to, deary.