The second stanza was one of my favourites and I agree with fountain it could easily be sung. Very beautiful poetry. The thing about your poetry is it saddens as well as amazes me. You got my 5...

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Wow, this was great. I love the emotion. Great job!

Another one I liked. And although it was long, It kept my attention from start to finish! The flow was ok, And the rhyming was good. All over, I loved it! So you did a great job again with this one. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee xx

Aww.. itz so sad.. but so beautiful.. this poem contains so many emotions that i bet lotsa ppl can relate to.. keep up the gr8 work!
jessy

Wow...the emotions in that poem...I loved it...i could feel everyword...beautiful work....
Emma 5/5

I can relate to the poem- and i think alot of people can- its perfect

Really beautifull, beautifull expressed, feels familiar, love it

A very sad song, but very very sweet! I agree with the people above it would make a very nice song! It was a very different write and i really enjoyed reading it, mostly because I can relate to it and it felt like you were in my head reading my emotions and thoughts!

Wow i reeaally love it!!! your great. and yeah it would make a great song. your a great writer.

I really loved the emotion in this poem!! This would make a great song!! Wonderful!! Couldnt change a thing!! Sectacular (sp)!! 5/5

That's really good, yet sad. x_X

I love it though, it made ALOT of sense and flows wonderful, looking foward to reading your others.

WOW, I loved it. This was well written, and with a lot of emotion at that. I absoultly loved it. The flow was awesome. Keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

Wow that was a very emotional poem and I could definitely relate to it. You did a great job on this, it sounds like it came straight from your heart, which makes the best poems in my opinion. The flow of it was really good and it was easy to read which helped keep the focus on the emotions. Great job on this!

Aww.. we all feel like that when we lose someone hun.. this was very emotional, it flowed well, and i couldn't see any errors! great job! excellent write! 5/5

I liked that, it was emotional which is what i like about poems, i couldnt se anything wrong with it, and it was of a good length.
well done
xxxx

WOW! I love this poem! It is so good! A lot of emotion! Thanx for commenting on my poem! 5/5 hehe

Wow... i can totally relate to this poem.. it like describes my last relationship perfectly. It was beautiful!!