Eternal Bliss

by Danka   Apr 28, 2006


As i drift into sleep
I see you there
Staring intently
Implying your care
Your once young face
Is wrinkled with age
Your skin turned grey
From a sandy beige
I'm half asleep
I'm almost gone
I'm almost there
It won't be long
The tests complete
I wander through heavens mist
I follow an angel to my den
As i reach my eternal bliss.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Danka

    Hey thanku very much haven't read ur work yet but i intend to n i will let ya kno wot i fink
    Danka
    x

  • Hey, i liked this alot. It read well throughout and your choices of words worked well. Very well written, 5/5.

    xoxox Charl xoxox