Comments : The worst suicide...*

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Nice job. I like the way you started it off. Nice choice of words. Then it followed through toward the end. Nice. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Moose

    Very good for any christian contemplating suicide. I know if I had read this i would throw that knife way away from me and think about it. What a great way to end it to. Did not expect the part about hell , very nice. I don't know. I'm really speechless about this one. I'm putting you on my favs. 5/5

    Great poem
    Yours truly,
    Bryce

  • 17 years ago

    by Imogen

    The ending is quite unexpected. The suspense is carried all the way through. The ending is brilliant. It is one of the best scuicide poems i have read.
    imi

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Woh! Awesome poem! It was a really great! I really liked it ! 10/10!
    -CHEERS- ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    Wow....
    pretty amazing, if i say so myself. i enjoyed every bit of it.
    5/5
    Lauren

  • 17 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Wow! no wonder you're proud! this is one of the best poems i have read in a long time!

    well done!!

    lonelynow x x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    I liked it. There was something very touching and meaningful about it. Very well done.
    ~Fallen

  • 17 years ago

    by Someone special..

    Totally agree with the comments here, this is a really great poem and is followed through nicely, glad i stumbled across it! Keep Writing!

    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Grrt job!!!!!! i loved the way the weapons u were going to use dissapeared! awesome plot carried out soooooo well...i can believe how grrt this is....i loved the ending and i commend u for making reading it rlly worth my time!
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 17 years ago

    by brkendown

    Aww i love this poem!!! WONDERFUL WRITE keep up the good work! and remember im here if u need any one any time!
    ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Omg i love this poem
    its amazingly wrriten!
    i love long rhyming poems =]
    thaks you also for mycomment youmade me smile and feel a lot better today=] so thank you=]
    your going on myfaves =]
    thanks again
    love
    alice
    xxxxxx

  • Oh, i loved this poem. your an awesome writer and so great at explaing to the reader! thanks for the comment on my poem!
    xoOx molly

  • 17 years ago

    by Nandiix3

    I toally agree with what every1 else is saying.. out of all teh suicide poems ive read this is the absolutel best... the rest are deep and end with like bloody stuff but this is really different.. amazing... 10/10

  • 17 years ago

    by Nandiix3

    I toally agree with what every1 else is saying.. out of all teh suicide poems ive read this is the absolutel best... the rest are deep and end with like bloody stuff but this is really different.. amazing... 10/10

  • 17 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    Woah.great poem. i loved it! thanks for commenting on mine.

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥sheena♥

    Hey this is a great poem! Its like a message to all of the emo people. I can be emo to so im not sayin nothing about emo people, but anyways i use to be really emo and poems like this helped me get over it bcuz i know if i ever killed myself it would just make things worse. Great poem!!! Keep up the great work!
    Sheena

  • 17 years ago

    by {get*lost}

    That was such an awesome poem!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by MizzBelle

    Wow..This poem is really good!..I really enjoyed reading it. Your very talented. By the way thanks for the comments on my poems I appreciate them. Keep up writting because your good at it. Lotz Of Love-xox.

  • Great poem!! It makes u think twice about sucide...and wat cums after u leave this hell ---> how u will b in the hell for eternity - Great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is really good.