You Are All He Doesn't Deserve

by Carlee Ann   Apr 29, 2006


What you are doing
The words you say
It's not right or fair
For you to act this way

What has this done to you?
What have you faced?
To make you so unrealistic
To make you a disgrace?

It's not enough anymore
You can't take control
You aren't just killing pride
You're killing someone's soul

Look at what you're doing!
You're tearing him apart!
And if you keep on going...
You're going to break his heart.

He is so much more
Than you think him to be
I wish you could look
And see what he is to me

At least tell him that you love him
At least say that you're proud
Stop ripping him to pieces
Your actions speak so loud

I can't look at you the same
For making him feel this way
He struggles with who he is
Because of you every day

It's like you've got him locked
And he can't escape from your trap
Every degrading thing you say
Could cause him to snap

He doesn't deserve this
And you don't deserve such a son
Realize what you have is amazing
And that he is finally done

Say what you can
And talk what you will
But he'll be okay without you
It's his life to fulfill

You may think you have control
You may think you know it all
But he is everything and more -
And you won't make him fall.

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    Hey there, its been so long im sorry
    i hope you are doing ok, this poem
    its just so awsome
    still as awsome as ever really
    hope your doing ok, miss you lots
    take care much Love
    pax

  • 17 years ago

    by none

    Ex-cel-ant carlee arlee!! I loved it it was really good, really emotional, very well written. keep it up babe.

    ~chelsea~