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by KP Apr 30, 2006 category : Love, romance / desired love
Why don't you look at me The way you look at her I just want to ask this question Why are my feelings such a blur She may be beautiful I can see that But i have personality Yet I am treated like a doormat I see i will never be The one you desire So now i leave you You have set my dreams on fire But look you are coming my way You want to talk to me My heart is beating fast How can this be I thought i would never Have a chance with you I thought my world Would always be blue Now you start speaking You know how i feel You have kept it a secret To you i DO appeal This has to be a dream It could not happen in reality You feel the same way You do like my personality I have found my Romeo And I am his Juliet I have found my happy ending To be continued yet
by Wings Of Flames
I thoroughly enjoyed it. The rhyming broke in a few places but it still was quite impressive great job Hope your love lasts and lasts ~Em
by Luna
Such a great poem.. i don not know how it feels to be like that for i have not been rejected but i love the emotion you use