I don't love you

by Heather   Apr 30, 2006


I'm so tired of people talking
Saying that we belong together
Last year is gone ,
It's time to move on

Things have changed
And so have we

Once i was drawn in
By your blue grey eyes,
Once upon a time you held my heart,

But that was last year,
And i wish the last trace
Of our what was never quite
A romance would simply fad
And disappear

Yet they still whisper
And echo a lie that you
Still have my eye,

It's over ,it's done, let it go,
I answer most plainly,

Do I love you?

My answer?

No

i know this isn\\\'t very good and i still need to edit it, but if you have any suggestions let me know!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    I believe this is a geat poem. I like the different style of writing you had. It was very unique. 5/5 for me
    xoxoxox
    Jess

  • 17 years ago

    by StormShadow

    I think its looking good so far, il check again 2 see if u change it!

  • 17 years ago

    by k

    O

  • 17 years ago

    by Yazdan

    This is an awesome poem. I know a friend who would really like this poem. As for suggestions, i have none. Awesime job.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I thought it was quite good, just take away the /...
    Check out mine some time;)
    Love,
    Line