Wow...just wow. this has a nice flow and is very well written. good job! 5/5

This is one of my favorite poems! I really loved how it flowed! You are a really great poet! good job! 5/5!

I'm done with your game
But most of all you
Should have seen this coming
After all you put me through

^In this stanza the rhythm and flow is thrown way off. Maybe, you could consider revising that stanza... Other than that I absolutely loved it! 5/5

Excellent job! Great flow

It had a lot of emotion even tho it was short to the point i can completely relate...its a great feeling when you move on..keep writing 5/5

5/5 really good even tho it waz short u exprezzed how u felt really well and i loved dat....i hope u keep writing cuz ur really talented at it

much luv
peachez

It is really good and meaningful

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!