Spiraling

by elly   May 1, 2006


Spiraling down
Into your nothingness
Drowning in all
Of your lovliness

You broke my heart once
Now you're breaking it again
Why won't you let me go,
Continuing to distrust all men?

Why do I matter to you,
When you dropped me so fast?
I don't know if everything you say is true,
Remember my imagination is vast.

Or have you forgotten,
Everything I did?
Did you really forget,
Everything I said?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Holly

    Wow, get out of my head! ; ) I have a guy like this that breaks me then builds me back up! Good Job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    This ones short too and its good, but i think you can do better, longer pieces that would totally rock. so keep writing and expressing yourself, youll find a natural flow where the words just seem natural and rhyme may not matter as much. cyaa,
    -Luke

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