This is so awesome!!!! omg i love it!!!! keep it up!!!

This Is Once Again A Great Poem Written By You...I Hope You Feel Better Soon...Always Remember: Life Goes On...
Take Care...
Luv,
The Bell :]

Wow this was unbelievably amazing...
5/5 most definatly.

Aw wow. This was really say. I can relate heaps. I honestly thought it was good. It could do with a little bit of work. But not that much, I still loved it. Keep it up! 5/5

`taleee xx

This is such a strong and heartfelt poem.. I could definitely relate to it, except substituting girl for guy. I love the emotions that you put in this. My favorite lines were:
The stars are gone,
The trees die.
The fish disappear,
and you still can't cry.
That last line really left an impact on me. Great job on this! I loved it!

Ah! i loved it I so know how this feels.. and

When you look to the sky, you hope to find stars.
When you look to the ocean, you hope to see fish.
When you look for a forest, you hope to find trees.
When you look into their heart, you hope to find love.

and

The stars are gone,
The trees die.
The fish disappear,
and you still can't cry.

because its like answering itself and it was a great way to look at it... well sad but poetically great great job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

That's sad. Heh..I shouldn't have picked a sad poem.. Ohwell.. Very well. I loved it. Great Job, and it kinda reminds me of something which happend to me..

The stars are gone,
The trees die.
The fish disappear,
and you still can't cry.

this was my favorite part. the rhyming was perfect, and it jsut really spoek to me

and exellent poem, but the way it went on without any break made it rather daunting to look at

i was unsure who the woman or girl the poem was. a mother or a girlfriend? it could have been ether.

i relly liked the poem. well done

Ruby

Omg!! that poem was so sad!!! i hope you don't feel like this!! it's wonderfuly written and i loved it! unique style. 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Hey, this was a great poem, I love these lines....

When you look to the sky, you hope to find stars.
When you look to the ocean, you hope to see fish.
When you look for a forest, you hope to find trees.
When you look into their heart, you hope to find love.
you lose your sight,
and love turns to sorrow as sorrow slowly ends your fate.
The stars are gone,
The trees die.
The fish disappear,
and you still can't cry.

very good, loved it! keep up the good work!

This is a very very beautiful poem, i love it 5/5

I'm left shattered and un attended to..
Not enough faith to live on.

that is my favorite line. this is a great poem. i loved your flow, and you emotions. great descriptions. 5/5

Wonderful write! I truly enjoyed it. Very sad yet beautiful.

Take care

Aww that was truly a wonderful and heartfelt poem. Very sad, yet extremely beautiful and a sure pleasure to read. Keep it up! 5/5 xxx

Amazing Write! This Was So Full Of Emotion And The Flow Was Amazing! I Really Enjoyed This Poem :D 5/5
My Favorite Lines Were:
The stars are gone,
The trees die.
The fish disappear,
and you still can't cry.

They Impacted The Poem And Were Outstanding! Your An Amazing Writer Keep It Up!
love,
Steph*xthesetearsfalldownlikerain*

Wow david I love this poem, the end could use a little more but my favorite part was ...

When you look to the sky, you hope to find stars.
When you look to the ocean, you hope to see fish.
When you look for a forest, you hope to find trees.
When you look into their heart, you hope to find love.
But once you lose your hope.
you lose your sight,
and love turns to sorrow as sorrow slowly ends your fate.
The stars are gone,
The trees die.
The fish disappear,
and you still can't cry.

....pretty much all of that! but that was everyones favorite part lol, see these are my kind of favorite poems and not the rhyming ones because those make me feel like Im in kindergarten! lol well keep up the big work big bro.

Woah...that was amazing! i can totally relate to how this feel, except with guys. anyway, wow this is super amazing! 5/5 congrats on gettin 1st in my contest

I love the sky/stars-heart/love verses.

Thankz for participating in my contest!

Cant say anything... speechless... I loved it.. not much more to say

Love Always
~Casey J