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by Antanasia   May 2, 2006


THE PERSON THAT SHE USE TO BE ISN'T HERE ANYMORE. HER SELF ESTEME HAS BEEN LOWERED AND NOW SHE ISN'T ADORED. PEOPLE MISSES THE OLD HER AND WISH THAT SHE WILL COME BACK SOON. BUT HER SOUL HAS BEEN TAKEN AWAY AND SENT TO THE MOON.

HER BODY IS STILL HERE BUT, HER PERSONALITY HAS DIED. BECAUSE HERSELF ESTEME WAS LOWERED SHE CRIED AND CRIED. SHE USE TO BE THE LOUD AND VIBRANT GIRL. THAT GIRL HAS GONE AWAY, AND NOW SHE IS SAD AND LONELY AND DOESN'T COME OUT TO PLAY.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Em

    I liked this poem but it lacked in structure...you had a good idea going though...keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by dee

    I enjoyed your poem. i liked the flow. keep it up.
    dee