I Found Her
Star-dusted In Her Shell
Crotched To a Life
Shes Accepted As Her Hell
^^^ that stanza was so powerful Nikki I just loved it so much!
I really loved the way you started off with this poem the first stanza really got my attention
And your last stanza..UH! what a way to end it..I hate telling people good job on poems that are sad and about them (please feel better hun your in my prayers) but Nikki you do have talent and I did enjoy the way you wrote this
Chelsey-Lynn

I think the capital letters for each word was a bit much because this poem was really really well written. I also hate saying great job ona sad poem, or any poem for that matter, because I like trying to help it in someway. But this poem was attention getting, sad, emotion that just washes over the reader.

I love this i love how you can put all those words together. ~silent eyes~

Nikki, talk about powerful!!! This poem moved me in ways I can never say. This is an outstandingly superb write.

Oh damn this is a strong piece Nikki it made me think back to some sad memories - it was deep and full of heartfelt anguish and emotion, it was raw and it was a real more than anything a true pleasure to read. You have an amazing talent with words Luv Eirisa

Wow I love this poem. I loved the flow, it's so haunting. I really love your use of words. It's really incredible!

The first and last stanza are really my favorites!
The first really got my attention, and the last one left me speechless.

You are an incredible poetess. I really have respect for you work. It's so inspiring.

Very well done once again.

Lotsaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Wow, this is incredibly sad, but very well written! The flow to this was flawless...

"I Found Her
Despite Her Silent Plea
I Freed Her Broken Soul
And Realized It Was Me"
^^^ Love this stanza and the ending was quite powerful!

I find it interesting how so many of us who feel depressed or have the joy of being on meds refer to ourselves in the first person. There are so many poems about us finding ourselves in shadowed darkness it makes it hard for me to understand how everyone else around can be so thick that they would miss it. I great poem, I hope the best for you. *hugs*

-Tainted

Beautiful job Nikki *hugs* i liked the repeated "i found her", it made it interesting, i wanted to know who you found. love the title also. XXXXX
JL

Wow, this peom was powerful. It was emotional and I could feel the poem inside. i believe it was well written and keep up the good work. 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Wow this is...VERY STRONG...real nice flow. wow. this is an amazing poem! 5/5

Really really great job.
I loved reading it.
Emma xox

WOW! such strong emotion but kinda makes you realize sometimes others cant help you so you have to help yourself but awesome you really know how to write poetry cant wait to read some more by you

(and then what happened?).............

Seriously, though, I think I know you.....I'm just a bit older, is all.....

Wonderful piece .....It seems you found yourself 8 different times (at least)....how marvelous!...What wonders await, my dear........

Did I mention ....Really Wonderful....such a Being you are....Silent Eyes said exactly what I was thinking...
This is one of Those that I wait for.....Thank you.

Did I mention ....Really Wonderful....such a Being you are....Silent Eyes said exactly what I was thinking...
This is one of Those that I wait for.....Thank you.

OMG (as they say )I'm back...
For your consideration
'And Realized *She* Was Me'......if you see what I mean, so to speak...........

the caps, by the way were an excellent choice....

Wow, great job. Excellent twist in the end

This could be the best poem I've ever been fortunate enough to read. Honestly, it's beautiful! A true gift you have. I'm in awe....lovely, lovely! Hope you don't mind if I print it, I must share it with a friend. :-)
-uponfairywings

Awesome.... This is like the greatest poem i have read all day... And i think about it like as it was me... Because some it describes me... But yeah i loved it.... ~Tayla