Saved

by Slaughtered Pixie   May 4, 2006


Will i ever be saved?

time is killing me slowly

do you understand?

i'm dying

this pain aches

more than you can imagine

my head is throbbing

my heart

is

broken

hold my hand

comfort me in

my time of

need

take a chance

this is the one time

i could truly use

a friend

the castle that's

in my mind

is breaking

apart

you can leave now

i see

the white light

will i be saved?

**I wrote this when I was in pain.**

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  • 18 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    Two thumbs up. I like this poem ALOT. I dont know why but just the way you wrote it got wrapped into it. Check out mine sometime. Great Job!