The end.

by silvervein   May 5, 2006


Im going out of my mind
hearing voices telling me
i must do it...

standing on the cliff
ready... ready to end
this lonely life...

wind blowing in my hair
hearing the voice...
standing waiting realising
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  • 17 years ago

    by shae r

    Thankyou so much for you comment it means a great deal.
    this poem is amizing!! short but meaningful and the way it is laid out really makes a difference. good work.
    Shae Radford ღ

  • 17 years ago

    by Eduardo Serrano

    Wow I like this one! ^__^ It's short and well thought.

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Now thats quite a uinque way of writing and its very impressive too

    great work

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bran

    Hey, that was an awesome poem. I love it. Gonna check out your other stuff. Oh and check out some of my stuff too. xox Bran*

  • 17 years ago

    by cassie

    That was so touching, that was an excellent poem and im sure many people would agree, you have a real talent for expressing your emotions, if you could comment on some of my poems it would be much appreciated.
    love cass xoxo

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