That seemed very emotional. And the rhyming was very good. I loved it!

Shallow, emotionless tears
Fall from my saddened eyes
As every one of my fears
Confirms your loveless lies

That was my favorite part. The structure was perfect and the rhyming flawless. Great Ending, and perfect timing. Keep writing!

Such a sad poem! The emotion comes across so strongly in this piece, a real tribute to lost friendships. The rhyme worked really well and again nothing seemed forced, your use of enjambment helps to keep the poem flowing, all in all I really liked this one, 5/5 x

Wow.. this poem is saying so much.. I can relate. I agree with everyone rhyming and flow are absolutely perfect. Truly an emotional piece! I am very impressed.. Awesome work!

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Wow.. that was very good.. im goin thru sumtin similar with a friend rite now.. just keep ur head up! :) i lovveedd this part, it is awesum! :

Shallow, emotionless tears
Fall from my saddened eyes
As every one of my fears
Confirms your loveless lies

itz just so perfect.. i love it! keep up the great work! 5/5
jessy

You write so well! To be honest, it's a wonderful poem!

Awesome poem very short and sweet! The flow was even better on this one it was not forced upon at all it was great!

Please r/r/c foriegner and here i am

Sole --
Not bad! For starters, I really liked how you rhymed line 1 with 3, but still rhymed 2 with 4. It added a nice twist, in which most people fail to include in their poetry. I think that you as a person are a true poet, and keep up your great work.

Samantha Hollywood

You really brought your feelings out and your view on this friendship... Hope all works out!
Well done

Emotional and heartfelt. Good write. Keep writing... 5/5