by Extreme Philifan May 6, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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Shining forth like a shooting star. |
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The end had been a shocker. First it seemed to be a breakup but was in fact different then that. Thought that twist had been quite effective yet wasn't really interested in reading it. Still it had been a good job. The stars was pretty cool for its use as well because it had stood out. |
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Your sweet |
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She must be special |
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Nice rhyming |