This is a very beautiful, yet kind of a sad poem. You explain it very well and stay with it; very honest and sincere.

You ARE a great writer, I can definately see your name on a New York Best Sellers booklist in the future haha =)

If you have time, could you check out my poems. Of course, they're probubly not as good as yours, but I try. Can't wait to see what you come up with next in EOP. See ya there!!

Sarah-Joy

Yet another flawless flow with a profound theme

To find four words that both ryhme and fit. you have done a splendid job at this.

a few small points.

"a life with a different rhyme and rhyme." i dont thing you needed to repeat that.

actully thats the only critisisme i have.

you are a very skilled writer.
5/5
Ruby

Brilliant poem, it was very well written. I know how hard it is to rhyme every line in each stanza without using 'forced' rhymes, but this worked really well, and flowed beautifully.

keep it up.

xXx

I really liked this poem!!! It was a pretty good one for " Nobody knows it but me!" You came in 2nd in my contest!!! Wouldn change a thing!!! 5/5

Hey, this is really good...that would be hard to go through...i'm thankful that i didnt have to go thru with that...daily life struggles...if this is true i hope everythingz going alrite and what not...you did a great job...keep it up
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Hey. You won one of the five prizes in my contest. Congrats! Since you won, I guess you know how I feel about it. But Ill say it anymays.

Excellent!!

Excellent poem.. the rhyme scheme was great and it flowed nicely.. 5/5

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