UNDER THE SUN

by KiSsEd*By*PaIn   May 7, 2006


WHAT I DO
YOU SHALL NOT KNOW

I MAY DO THINGS THAT WILL NOT SHOW.

I JUST HOPE YOU WILL NEVER LET ME GO.

BUT OF COURSE YOU DID AND THAT DOES SHOW

THAT IF I DIE YOU WILL NEVER CARE AND IF I GET HURT YOU WILL JUST STAND THERE.

SO THAT IS WHY I DO NOT CARE
THAT YOU HAVE LEFT ME HANGING THERE.

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  • 18 years ago

    by black_rose

    I luv it stinky bob...just kidding luvu
    Kat...?

  • 18 years ago

    by Whisper

    I recommend a different word selection. You already used show once..using it again so closely to the first time you used it makes the poem fall back..Its nice though, good job

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