Deadly silence.

by cαtαstrophe--x   May 7, 2006


Please comment and vote, i wasnt really sure what catagory to put it in.let me know what you think!.

Do you care that your silence is deadly,
every word unsaid is like a bullet to my head,
what we have is close to perfect,
but in reality my questions are left unsaid.
I feel like I'm giving so much of me,
and getting little in return,
all I want to know is how you feel,
and when I ask it is like a big ordeal.
I can't take knowing if what we have isn't real,
am I making a fool of myself?
Or do you feel this feeling I feel?
I guess we will never know,
because your feelings for me you hate to show,
we will keep walking on this deceiving road,
and maybe one day you'll grab hold.

(c) Rachel 2006.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. I'm kind of speechless about this one...um...oh yea, towards the end you changed the rhyming pattern which kind of made the poem awkward to read. and you could put the poems in stanzas if u want it look more professional. overall Amazing poem. 5/5