My heart is breaking. This is soooo sad. I don't know her, but would you give her my condolences? This is beautiful.

Sad
Well written
heartbreaking
I love the way your words flowed...
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She's missing his voice, she's missing his smell
Avoiding the spots where he used to dwell
She's dying a little bit more each day
As she thinks of the boy who slipped away...
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favorite stanza

*7/5*
amanda

Awwwwwwww what a wonderful poem i loved it!!!

This was a precious dedication.
The flow was awesome and it was truly heartfelt. It almost brought a tear to my eye. I also have a dedication poem much like this but from a different point of view...check it out its called Friend To The End
Great work!

This poem made me cry. you see my brother died so i know and live each day what this poem explains. my mom crys in front of me and everything and its so hard to take! thank you for writing this!

Wow this is ver sad... very well written... amazing job... keep writting... u are incredible...

::MELI::

Aw. This is so sad, almost made me cry. Good job keep writing you're awesome. 5/5

Stunning, truly amazing!!! this poem moved me like none other has... my best wishes.
-xXx-

This poem is so great

Aw this poem is so sad. You did a great job on this. The flow & the rhythm was all good & really brought out all of the emotions in the poem. I loved it.

Beautiful :-)

Hey, this is really good...itz sad...i know that if i had a child...i dont think i'd be able to handle it if i outlived them...i now know what my rentz woulda felt like..great write..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Oh my god this made me cry it beautiful it explanes wot i see wen i look in the eye of my friend hoo past away a few mounths ago's mum the pain and hurt tis great !
emma x x

Wow, This was really sad. I could really feel the emotions. You expressed them really clear, Especially since this is about someone else. A really great job. I loved it! 5/5

`taleee xx

A lot of emotion. i like it 5/5

I really like this poem 5/5!!

Omg i love it i am crying rite now that is such a good poem tho i give it a definate 5/5~brittness

Thats possibly the saddest thing ive ever read.

the last line made that poem.

That was fantastic... I loved it!

I love u.
Dont no u.
But I love u.