Comments : The Tears Of A Mother

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    My heart is breaking. This is soooo sad. I don't know her, but would you give her my condolences? This is beautiful.

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Sad
    Well written
    heartbreaking
    I love the way your words flowed...
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    She's missing his voice, she's missing his smell
    Avoiding the spots where he used to dwell
    She's dying a little bit more each day
    As she thinks of the boy who slipped away...
    -----------------------------

    favorite stanza

    *7/5*
    amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Awwwwwwww what a wonderful poem i loved it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    This was a precious dedication.
    The flow was awesome and it was truly heartfelt. It almost brought a tear to my eye. I also have a dedication poem much like this but from a different point of view...check it out its called Friend To The End
    Great work!

  • This poem made me cry. you see my brother died so i know and live each day what this poem explains. my mom crys in front of me and everything and its so hard to take! thank you for writing this!

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow this is ver sad... very well written... amazing job... keep writting... u are incredible...

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by LossxOfxControl

    Aw. This is so sad, almost made me cry. Good job keep writing you're awesome. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Stunning, truly amazing!!! this poem moved me like none other has... my best wishes.
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This poem is so great

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aw this poem is so sad. You did a great job on this. The flow & the rhythm was all good & really brought out all of the emotions in the poem. I loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Holly Nicole Williams

    Beautiful :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good...itz sad...i know that if i had a child...i dont think i'd be able to handle it if i outlived them...i now know what my rentz woulda felt like..great write..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Oh my god this made me cry it beautiful it explanes wot i see wen i look in the eye of my friend hoo past away a few mounths ago's mum the pain and hurt tis great !
    emma x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow, This was really sad. I could really feel the emotions. You expressed them really clear, Especially since this is about someone else. A really great job. I loved it! 5/5

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Angel of Poetry

    A lot of emotion. i like it 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexi

    I really like this poem 5/5!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hey Brittknee

    Omg i love it i am crying rite now that is such a good poem tho i give it a definate 5/5~brittness

  • 18 years ago

    by KayTOTS

    Thats possibly the saddest thing ive ever read.

    the last line made that poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    That was fantastic... I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Abzy

    I love u.
    Dont no u.
    But I love u.