Very nice...I wish I could write so openly about my inner demons and my fears.
You do it so well and with such interesting personification, really a delight to read.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wonderfully done Melissa... Another beautiful write.

A lovely write Melissa. You have an amazing way with words .... wish mine were as expressive :) xx

You Write About The Things People Never Think To Write About, You Have a Trully Artistic Soul And a Talented Flavor In Every Poem You Write, If Your Poem Was a Meal I'd Ask For Seconds 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
-Keep Poetry Alive-

Melissa, this write is stunning. You express things most people only think about. That makes your poems so incredible.

I Love your poem! it is so kool.

Much Love,
*Jessica*

Omg. you are living in my mind. so good. i esp love

Hey man, show me a hero
that's not strung out on morphine
perhaps then I'll believe in dreams

amazing. keep it up!