I'm dieing

by Hold Me   May 9, 2006


All my lifes delights fail
As They all sneer,
you hammer 1 more nail
As Its all so clear,
Im going so very pale
As my blood disappears,
None will see through my veil
As I sink in tears,
I'll travel on my downwards trail
Witch I have for so many years,

pls rite a comment i'll do the same back

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alex Kessler

    This is pretty amazing! I like the picture you painted. The Metaphores are so clear too!
    Good Luck!

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