The alley

by claire   May 9, 2006


The deep dark path that leads to hell,
will be your sorrow not your wealth.
will i survive who can tell,
in this hole that i have fell.
has anyone thought to look for me,
as i'm shaking here with my grazed knee.
i hate this place please rescue me,
take me home please let it be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lestat

    I really liked this one
    Keep it up hun !

  • 17 years ago

    by hayley

    This is really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason

    Great poem with a lot of meaning, I like it. Keep up the good work.

    -Jason

  • 18 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    This is a good poem not ur best btu its still good.good work 5/5

    Jay Jay

  • 18 years ago

    by Silver

    Love this poem!!! its really really good, I think you did a really good job on this one, better then mine! lol. Keep writing you're really good!
    -Sliver

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