You have got a really good writing patten once again this is a fantastic piece. and thank you again for commentin on mine

xoxox

Wonderful piece as always... Your descriptions are wonderful and the flow of the poem was great along with the structure. Another great read :)

Fantastic....what a cracking subject to write a poem on, such emotion and description in this poem its unbelievable...definetly talented you are Kaylee.

I want to say thank you for your comment on my poem Justice....I really appreciate you taking the time to have a read it.

Thank you and take care, Lise

Very creative abstract details. Great descriptions

Wooww! VERY good! simply amazing! such vivid pictures appeared in my eyes when i read this! very good job!
jessy

Wow. This was really good Kaylee, For some reason I found it different from your other poems. I really like that 3rd stanza. Not quite sure why, It just really grabbed my attention, I re-read it another 3 times, It was really good. Keep up the great work =] 5/5

`taleee xx

Omgash i love the

electricity and sadness in this poem

this is preety amazing
and appropriate for how i feel to.

great write 5/5

This is really good! i added to my poem and sorry about the spelling i suck lol thanks for the comment!
keep up the writing!
Ashley

Such amazing talent packed into a single poem! This is definatly one of those poems that just make you stand back and say "WOW" Your amazing with words and you make such clear disscriptions!

Wow you really express your feelings it seems like...i really like that..write about whatever i'm sure you can do it! I really liked it though!
Funkymunz94

Holy Cheese! This was briliant took some reading to get the meaning spelled out in my mind but it was great. Such power in all your work

Sondos

This poem is deep and thoroughly explained. I enjoyed reading it and thought again - you are very talented. Amanda :)

Wow that was good! i love your use of strong language, it touches me!!!! 5/5

This was a really great piece, you really tied it together well, and you used excellent vocabulary i have no idea why its only a 4.4 stupid downvoters.. anyways great job 5/5

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

O wow for being based on a television show. Great write hun.

Very nice poem Kaylee. I really liked the metaphors and images you brewed with your words. Very well chosen and formatted. The small things count big in the end. Keep on writing!

Wow the imagery in this poem is mine blowing. It was written so beautifully, I love it. It's amazing how specific things could make us ponder about life. 5/5 Keep it up and thank you for your criticism on my poetry, I made some changes.

*mind blowing. lol sorry for the typo.

*mind blowing. lol sorry for the typo.