Please let me know if i should try funny poem next time or not?

What a poem, perfect. u should write more funny poems. cus they r nice.

That's sad but you can't make someone love you back.

Thank u all, i decide to write more,lol
wait for the next one.

Goran, when will be ur next move? i mean another poem.

It is a funny but sad poem, i mean funny for me to read but sad for you to write.
good luck with your new sister,lol. j/k don't be mad

Goran joon, Do u check ur email daily? u know wat i mean, do u?

YES I DO..................

Cute poem

Hahaa niceee
"Finaly" .. has 2 'l's
[Finally]

THATS GOOD.. forgiving is the SPIRIT

Lol that was pretty good=D it made me think for a sec there! I can only suggest caping ur I's and stuff, other then that it twas good=D keep it up!

Its sad but still in a sence kinda funny ya and i know what thats about well 5/5
~courtney~

Lol i know a girl who did the same thing to a boy! he loved her lots lol

nice poem!love all your poems! you really got the talent

Nice rhyme good vibe...

Lissa

:) awwww lol 5/5 (nice rhyming)

Hey funny! lol i didnt get it the first time i read it, but now i have, its really funny well done!
love mel

WOw!! I loved! it was mint!!!

By the way i can't comment on ur poes directly coz of my comp soz! so i'm gonna use this poem to comment on like 5 others!

I think 'the luckiest guy' is just the best eva! coz i think it is really deep!