Dying Inside

by ashley   May 10, 2006


I gave up my love for you cuz it only feels worse. u never felt the same and u make me so alone. only one way to stop the pain. sharpened blade, slice my wrist. down the road. across the street. feeling cold, seeing black. bleeding on ur bedroom floor. my suffering was a death wish that came true.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ashley

    This sucks i can make a better one

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie

    Good message. But.. It needs a bit of work. The grammer is pretty bad, Sorry to say. Maybe if you fixed that up, Put them into stanza's it could be alot better. You still did a great job though!

    `taleee

  • 19 years ago

    by p4y5c0

    Wow.......