This poem has a nice rhythym I like it alot.

Hey girlee.. awesome poem.. its so true.. guys are so confusing.. sometimes i wonder if anything goes through their heads! but there is someone out there for you.. you just have to be patient =] keep up the good work.. please comment on one of mine. xx

This is actually a good poem and i really like it. may i copy it in my journal for that "just in case i need it" moment? i'm sory bout what u may have gone through in order to feel those emotions to write this poem. hopefully things will get better? I hope so. Good Luck with your poems

Good poem!
i like the choice of words

I really like this poem, it shows a lot of feeling and has a nice flow

I really like this poem. The flow was off a little but the rhyming was great. Its a sad heart breaking poem, and you expressed in it very well.

Please comment and vote on some of my poems, thanks in advance

Good poem,this is whati know will eventuallyhappen with mybf ='[
aww well
its really good
5/5
keep it up
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx

Omg i absolutely love this i can kinda relate to it i have learned not to trust guys at all anymore. there NOTHING BUT LIES! especially the ones u think r different... but anyways lol this is soooo good i love it!!

Now now :P Not all guys are like that. Don't judge us off our worst specimen.

But anyway, back to the poem. It was great, I enjoyed reading it. And I can relate to it perfectly, so that makes me appreciate it even more. Keep up the good work. Great poem.

Omg this is makin me sad man i love it it is so deep and heatfelt maybe because thats like one of my ex bfs but yea i love it u hav a lot of talent

Well, im not much for comments....but i like it, for what it's worth

I love your writing this poem kicks ass

:) I THINK THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL. I KNOW THE PAIN..
LOVE ALWAYS,
RIANA
-XOX-

You are really good i love this poem it reminds me of my first love John Cox we were together forever then we broke up but we might get back together. Katina