Creation

by megan   May 12, 2006


I would follow you to the ends of the earth.
Touch your picture at night to feel your presence.
Hold your hand in mine. Intertwining as one.
Our hearts are melting. They hold our lives together.
The heart knows. It wants. Feels and falls.
Never will it break if we both believe.

You send me on a journey into water.
The bubbles around me create a cool relaxation.
I can breath even without air because that's what you are to me.
The water covers me like a blanket. Flowing over me. Streaming past me.
It won't ever leave. Just like you.

You send me to the flowers in the meadows.
They smell of a fragrance that is sweet and pure.
Their perfection engulfs me and holds me down.
I melt in their beauty. Tranquility all around.
You knew I'd be here. You found me amongst that still, silent place.

You send me to the mountains.
The cold breeze nips at my skin. Tears my flesh. Covers me in frozen anger.
You create this emotion.
You create this height.
You create the bad times. You create the good.

You send me to your bed side.
I see your smiling face on the soft feather pillow.
I reach out to touch it but you're gone.
The bed side melts.
I\'m back to the mountains.
Cold. Hard. Frozen pain.

You create this.

You send me to your heaven.
Its gates open up to me. Shining with incandescent light.
You call me to the brightness. I can hear the voice. Its soft and wanting.
I melt. I fall. I follow. I obey you.

You create me.

You send me home.
Home is where I belong.
Though you're not with me. It\'s just a dream.
Hopeless wishing.
Beloved wanting.
You're real, but not with me.

You're with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this poem is deep and excellently written, I love the descriptions in it and the metaphors. the imagery that you created is so vivid, truly amazing. Great love poem, with good choice of words and very original atmosphere. You described your emotions superbly through it.
    Excellently done, 5/5 from me.
    The ending is very effective, too.
    Keep up!