The hallow kid

by Doug   May 13, 2006


The kid who sits alone in class
The one that always seems to pass
He does not show a single emotion
Doesn't even have a notion.
He's the kid with no friends
The one that wants his life to end
He really has no where to go
So he's sitting home on Fridays all alone
The kid that has it hard at home
The one that never makes a sound
His wrists are bleeding
His heart is breaking
The hallow kid

*my best friend and i made up this poem and she said I could submit it *Thanks kels love ya*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kelsey

    I think i'm going to put this up on my poems too..because i love it so much..we did a good job really we did..and i might even try to go a little deaper with it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kelsey

    Haha we did great doug:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was good, But I think it would be better if you went deeper. It felt like I was wanted more. But it ended. So maybe if you worked on it a little more, It'd be awesome.

    `taleee

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