Its all better?

by Lestat   May 14, 2006


Promised me forever
Forever you'd be my Friend
You didn't say when i got better
Our friendship was to end
Now you're just rude
Like you dont care anymore
Just because I'm fine on the outside
Doesn't mean I'm not rotten to the core..
You act like I'm bad
You look at me as if Ive done something wrong..
You've thrown it all back at me
I knew this friendship wouldn't last long..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very nice
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    Very good. I can really feel it. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by ImmortalKitty

    Very good. I can really feel it. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Very nice. it was a clear and clever poem. the rhymes you used were good, and it flowed very well. i really enjoyed reading the poem. the length of the lines gave you more room to express yourself, but they were not all equal. this didnt take to much off the overall effect of the poem though

    good work!!!

    Ruby

  • 17 years ago

    by Sammib

    Really good. Loved the flow and the picture you paint...

    Godbless
    Sammib

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