Really beautiful

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I like this poem, it sounds alot like ppl in my school and me. I hope that you keep wrting. ~Kayla~ aka xxCleaverxX

Wow i love it!! you did an awsome job

Wow, I don't think there is anyone who could say something bad about this poem. It's just that touching and easy to feel. Keep up the work.

Hey Mona, I haven't commented on your poems in a while..Thought I'd read one. Well, this one is really good, and the repetivity of the poem has some effect, although it may have made me lose interest at some times. I love the way you ended it with that though...

Nice job, keep up the good work.

I just loved the poem! You described it so nicely. Excellent work!

Wow, I wanna beat that guy! You know how to get the reader to feel, it is truly a writers gift that you have, always a pleasure to read your work.

Great poem, it was very well written.
Great job!