Comments : I wanted to

  • 16 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Ok you kno u did amaziing with thiis.. i loved it... i wish u would write to me n tell me wats up... i miiss u... 5/5 loved the poem


  • 16 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Waow!! luvly poem..but sad..hope ur ayt!! keep up the gr8 work..i luv the flow and the words r sooo meaningful..luv it...:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Heidi

    Great writing! i'm glad you could share it with us all! it was awesome, keep it upp! i love your work


  • 16 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Absolutely beautiful poem hun... I've missed your poetry, I hope you come back and write some more! The rhyming pattern was perfect and I love the way you blend the words together. Keep writing and take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey cool poem
    nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
    if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
    ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
    thanksss :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ken

    Great poem keep up the great work 10/10*

  • Its such a beautiful peice yet its so sad...well structured!
    well done and keep it up