Ok you kno u did amaziing with thiis.. i loved it... i wish u would write to me n tell me wats up... i miiss u... 5/5 loved the poem

meli

Waow!! luvly poem..but sad..hope ur ayt!! keep up the gr8 work..i luv the flow and the words r sooo meaningful..luv it...:)
xxx

Great writing! i'm glad you could share it with us all! it was awesome, keep it upp! i love your work
5/5

heidi

Absolutely beautiful poem hun... I've missed your poetry, I hope you come back and write some more! The rhyming pattern was perfect and I love the way you blend the words together. Keep writing and take care!

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

Great poem keep up the great work 10/10*

Its such a beautiful peice yet its so sad...well structured!
well done and keep it up

xoxo