Our love

by X.x Ashamite x.X   May 16, 2006


From the very first moment i met you
I had devoted myself to you
Although at the start i didn't know what i was getting into
A love so deep
So passionate
So full of bliss
It was when it was time to say goodbye
I felt so cold and so empty
The pain is cutting though me like a sharp razor blade slicing deep into my soul
Now all i feel is misery and sorrow
How could it be that a love so strong
Could be wrenched apart so carelessly
As i sit here and think about the time we spent together
The things we shared
The look in your eyes when we first met
The tears flow from my eyes
I'm all cold inside but I'm left with a burning heartache.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sammib

    Very touching Ash! Heart breaking but still there is beauty in your words when you speak about the memories!! I loved it!

    Godbless
    Sammib

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Wow greatly nice poem it looks like realy difference the words the emotions are like mine too it is like the *prisoner* and the *broken heart* but it was so great ash you did a good job you have a golden heart nice keep it up