Its always end

by neverisme   May 16, 2006


Its was a long time ago but i never thought or knew that it would end this way its just started with a smile so bright and ended with dark fears and red tears all my points turned to random lines everything came so difficult and complicated and sweet dreams just turned nightmares as the summer white could get a fright tempest so now i know there is no way back to start it from the began its to to far to walk back i,ll never reach it and its so dark to walk in its just like being chained in the mid of hell no exit way or even emergency exits being in the the grisliest part of nightmare all ur life passing the same second of the fright vision everyday just like a dark days and moonless nights is compresss ur life so tight in sadness and lost sense of reality as living in horror movie waiting the the bad mens to end ur life feeling scared and trying to find a place to hide and feeling so hopeless and want to give up its always ends

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Okay, This was good. But I think you need to put some full stops and comma's in there. It'll make it easier for the reader to read. But it's still a good poem. Keep it up! 5/5

    `taleee xx