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by Frank Tolbert   May 16, 2006


I wonder if she knows..
This is a question that plaques me everyday
Does she love me or does she not
No one really seems to know
Enough about that
I thought she was my friend
She rejected my idea
I thought it was a good idea
I am sure that we would've had a good time
Now only time will tell

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Second line says plaques me; i think you mean plagues me. I could be wrong, but i don't think you are talking about teeth. Other than that it was a well -written poem. I am not a big fan of the whole love poetry/the guy or girl i like doesn't like me type thing. And I read one other poem that you had the same theme running through. I'm not saying they're bad, but I think you could write a whole lot better and about better stuff. But I like the way you write. Upfront, in the vernacular, very clear and straightforward.

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