APART
by Amadeous May 16, 2006
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You and I are growing up, and it is coming too fast. You and I are growing apart, i don't want it to last. I want us to be together, be one, be forever. but you like someone else and I do too. he used to always be together. like paper and glue. But he have grown apart and I don't know what to do. |
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17 years ago
by Yazdan
Your poem has a lot of meaning to it. But its somewhat hard to read. And you also seem to switch points of view from 1st person to 3rd. Its making the poem difficult to read. Other than that its really good and you simile is very effective.
