This was a very sad and emotional poem. It gave me goosebumps to read it. I thought this was a wonderful poem. I loved it. I'm sorry for the loss of your friend.

I really like ur poem keep the good work

I really like ur poem keep the good work

That was another amazing write, you truly are amazing!

I really really liked this XD

xxx take care xxx

This Is Such A Great Poem...Brought Tears To My Eyes! It's So Sad! Keep Up The Great Work...
Take Care...
Luv,
The Bell :]

Sad..emotional..heartfelt.everything a poem really needz..
and yeah i havent posted poems lately..and that was just one of em..i wanted to make it a profanity one...but then again she is my gf..tht wouldnt be right
anywayz great job
5/5
~MF~

Ohhh that is so sad and a very great poem.I send my condolences.

This poem definately has some deep feelings in it. Great flow also. Keep up the good work.

-Jason

This was soo good and sad take careur an amazing writer

I am so sorry. I hope you and your family are all alright now, and that you are all safe and healthy. Nice work on the poem.

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4.8./5

Nice poem;

The first stanza is a lot like a lyric i've heard. that goes like this;
"Within every single letter, in every single word
there will be a hidden message about a boy who loves a girl"

its There is by Boxcar Racer

OMG! WOW THiS iS DEEP! DiD HE REALLY DiE OVER A GiRL OR WAS iT JUST BECAUSE? WOW! THiS iS GREAT! KEEP iT UP! RATE AND COMMENT!
♥JUST-KiSS-ME♥

Ooohhh my... that was very sad.
uuuhhh... chilllllzzz
youre a REALLY good writer...
keep it up :D
xXxxX(( amanda ))XxxXx

He was the same age as me. im sorry to hear about that. very good poem though. flowed nicely. there were some gramatical errors but nothing too big to hinder the meaning of the poem. 5/5 for sure. i hope you still smile.