Suffocating

by ღ Torriee ღ   May 19, 2006


I am suffocating

And i just need to breathe

I.m smothered under pressure

i must be relieved

Nothing i do is right,

Nothing they say is fair

I cry and scream and throw a fit,

But no one seems to care

Nobody will listen,

To what i have to say.

My life is not important,

Yet, I'm living everyday.

I can't do what i want

I cannot stay out late

Here i sit and write this poem

To release all my pain and hate.

I'm confused and I'm alone

I'm lost inside my mind.

No one will search beyond my looks

To see what they might find.

So many thoughts confuse me,

Feelings i can't precive,

In this time of adolescence

And i just need to leave.

None of it makes sence

None of this seems real.

And noone understands

The emotions that i feel.

I'm still suffocating

And i still need to breathe.

I'm smothered under feelings

Let me be relived.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    Hmm, I definitely know how you feel. This is a great poem and you expressed yourself very well. There is now a spot on my favorites list with your name on it! =)

    *Grrreat work*

    x.xbrokenx.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    *relieved..... maybe??

    i dunno. anywayz, great poem. i liked it. always good to see a poem about everyday things. rock on!
    -Suzie

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