Currents

by Leah20   May 19, 2006


I. Skipping, skipping merily
All worries blown out to sea
No sorrow over what's to be
Or what lies ahead

II. Mishappen sorry souls
Now over seas the thunder rolls
Past events now take control
The pathway now lies dead

III. When, oh when will truth be found
When all is dead for fears' compound
Lost to hope now in cold ground
Lies the dream of Faith

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  • 16 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    Interesting format. I liked your use of metaphors and use of language, it was very well done. The last stanza really blew me away, the last line in particular "lies the dream of Faith." Great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Monica AKA Mika

    Nicley put Gurl! I love this one too! 5/5 fo sho! I love the way you speak the truth!

  • 17 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Wow, this poem too,is like a song for mariners or pirates or an Irishman.
    Great rythmn and tone.Wish you could hear me sing this poem!!.Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kathleen

    I thought that was good...
    i really liked it...
    Kathleen...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kara !

    This is great Leah. Again, I can't find a single fault with it. I love who you've worked the rhyming scheme. And the choice of vacabulary has left me with great descriptive imagery. You've definately became one of my favourite writers. x

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