It's a pretty good poem, though I prefer verses. This poem shows a lot of pain and hurt. Strong emotions. Good job.

Aww.. that very good! it really draws you in with all the short lines! i really liked it! :) excellent work! 5/5

Im not really into the sadder types of poems.. but hey i think you may have just changed that.. that poem had really good meaning and the way it was put together really kept me reading... please comment on one of mine... preferably one of my newest ones...
thanks a lot!

**meggie**

Wow this is really good, i read over it a few times, its magnificant, well done
5/5

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Now I wish I had written this...it sums up feelings and emotions so well..keep it up gurl!

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Awesum work you rock