Losing you

by Sammii Hunter   May 19, 2006


Please don't do this
I don't need to lose another friend
I already lost one
I don't need to go through that pain again
You don't need to end your life so soon
you have friends that love you...
friends like me...
if you leave us...
i will never be the same...
i look up to you...
you are like my brother...
but even more...
you were my lover...
I wouldn't be able to stand the pain...
of losing you...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    I agree a bit. it is unbalanced but it is really good.

  • 17 years ago

    by Catherine

    It rhymed at some parts, and din't at others, and that took away from it and made it seem unbalanced.