Some of it was rhyming and some of it wasn't, and I think that made it kinda unbalanced. ZFor example, in the end, I think something should rhyme with Joy.

Hm... i liked the content of the poem though... i guess we all need Jesus whether we know it or not. sometimes its hard to accept it.
good poem - well done

I can relate to every word, pretty much
good poem. 5/5
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Its very inspirational, and very true.
Good poem!

Beautiful poem. :)