Breath

by jello   May 19, 2006


I closed my eyes
You held your breath
You waited for me to come back
But i never did
I lost control
I let go
Never to look back again
You blamed yourself
You made me better though
But apparently that wasn't enough
I tried to stand tall
I didn't want to fall
But i did
So now I'm dead
Enough said
Don't wait for me
I'm not coming back
I'll save my breath
For when i see you once again

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  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey that was a nice poem, interesting concept
    I justw anted to point out that you would want breath instead of breathe. They are so similar yet different because of that e
    Thanks for reading my poem, I appreciate it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Morgan

    Very Cool poem

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