Burning eyes

by PS   May 20, 2006


My eyes burn at the thought of you
the farther away you get the more i hurt
you body pierces my eyes like a dart
forcing me to feel the pain of longing

your eyes harsh and a cold
pour fire into my eyes
the tears that i try to hold back
roll down my face in a cascade

as our song play on the radio
cd or the stereo
i feel my heart clench
and jump to hit me behind the eyes

i dont know if i love you
or just feel desire
keep going and ignore
the burning of my eyes

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  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I like how the poem doesn't rhyme but still has flow, hard to do nice job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Wow, how can ppl write a poem that's non-rhyming and make it still great!

  • 17 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    Nice connotative langauge, I love the wording.'

    ~blackrose

  • 17 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Teh words are good but the rhythm/ structure could do with a bit of work to make it more powerful xx