Why
by Dianna MacDonald May 21, 2006
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Why did u leave me here on my own y did u never come back y didn't u ever tell me good bye y did u never ever tell me that u loved me, y oh y did u cheat on me? i hope u r happy with her because u aren't ever allowed back here. i miss u so much but i cant do the lies no more have a good one i love u always but i don't no anymore GOOD BYE! |
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19 years ago
Ok well i no that i am new to the seen so plz cut me some slack i barely thing about what i am writing when i write it so.. im sorry if u dont like them i just dont really care sorry if this seems offencive...
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19 years ago
by Amber
I see a lot of emotion, but you have no structure whatsoever. Perhaps proper grammar, punctuation, spelling would help? Maybe you could deepen your details, re-think your diction ...
