Comments : Who said pain heals in time?

  • 17 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Great! So relates so much to me! :'(
    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brigitte

    *sigh* I know where your coming from sister. A very sad but sweet poem and i enjoyed it very much... Just a few idea's... In this line you had some typos

    I wish I could make them understands
    There only so much pain a heart and withstand

    I wish I coudl make them UNDERSTAND
    ThereS only so much pain a heart CAN withstand.

    Also in a few places you got kind of wordy and it kind of messed up the flow a bit, like here you rhymed kind of funny

    But what about me and how I feel
    This pain is just so un-real is so hard to deal

    I would have just left it at "Un-real"

    Other than that an overal good job, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    First off, Wonderful poem.
    Second off; I love the choice of words and the flow of it, it had wonderful meaning and alot of people could relate, so another good thing. I loved it. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    Great poem. You speak of your struggle well and how it affects your life altogether. Wonderful, keep writing. Keep your chin up, things will get better. I know you've probably heard that a lot, but they will. And thanks for oyur comment.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow what a fantastic poem! I can relate to this!

    This is breathtaking. I really really enjoyed reading this!

    Keep it up

    Lotsaaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 17 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Woah hun this is such a fantastic poem.. havent spoken 2 u for so long.. i hope ur ok.. i miss talkin 2 ya..woah this poem...i hpoe ur ok mwa!!

  • 17 years ago

    by jaimie

    This is good, really good

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    Just like everything u write...i luv it...i know many feel this way...an hundreds wish they could wirte it down as well as u have...ur a great writer...keep up the great work...

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    It took me a while to come across your poems, but this is a fabulous one for me to start off with, as I understand the sentiments.. Well done. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is such a lovely poem
    great write, so heart rending :) 5/5
    take care xx

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Simply amazing.

    and i understand what you're going through.
    and i completely agree.
    i dont think time heals pain.
    b/c for me, it's been three years.
    and it feel as though itz getting HARDER to let go. .

    great write. 5/5.