In The Rain

by The Flame Within   May 22, 2006


Drop by drop
sensation grows strong
anticipation
my hands hold hers
i await for the moment
her eyes
stare at mine
my heart beat quickens
the rain all around
we are soaked
the butterflies in my stomach
remember it is reality
both of us are waiting
our lips thirst for each other
who will give in first
i can hold back no longer
and in one quick moment
we meet
my heart stops
not because i have her lips
but because i have her
the simple joy of Love
this kiss a symbol
deeper then its appearance
of our Love
as we kiss
my arms wrap around her waist
in the rain
we hold each other
my heart now in her hands
if only the moment could never end

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    by cowgirlstar26

    5.5 great write

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    by Carlee Ann

    Nick! I miss you! And your poetry is just as good as ever... Great work, m'love. Great grand work.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    I liked how you put emotion and details so that you could picture everything happening. great job!! 5/5
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    ~DyingBlackRose~

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    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Beautiful poem!!! wow... an amazing piece! keep it up.
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