Wow this poem is a reallt tug of emotions
sad yet beautiful
wonderfully written
amazing
i love it!
well done...5/5

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Nice poem i been here before and it really enjoyed reading it you spoke well of your feelings keep up the great work

Awww hun this is s touching!
so adorable and has so much beautiful meanings!
the rhyme was really nice

I love it sweetie

Luv u
NemO xxxxxxx

I love the poem. The words paint a picture and your can feel the emotion. Truely great. :)

Yaayyyy!! A new one!:D
Wonderful as always dear...!
I love the way you describe stuff...its just so...beautiful...
Great job once again hunn....I will never say it enough...I love all your work and I can't wait for the next...
luv ya lots!-xxxx-

Wow that was a great poem i loved it so much you can almost picture everything :)

Awww...this is good, but VERY sad ending. I really liked the pictures you painted here. very very good. Love lots, Ashley

Hey I can totally relate to this, straight from the opening line, beautifully written, really touched me reading it

well done

dave x

Hey I can totally relate to this, straight from the opening line, beautifully written, really touched me reading it

well done

dave x

Some things when realized we feel bitter. i love ure poem

amanda

Kinda touching the last couple of lines are brill xxx

Always filled with feeling, you are a great writer Mona. You rock.