No Reason

by *BeautifullyBroken*   May 25, 2006


I have no reason to wake up
no reason to get out of bed
today is nothing special
just another day I dread.

I have no reason to live
no reason to move ahead
so I'll just lay here
and do nothing instead.

I watch the clock as time passes by
all day wondering why
amused by the way things change
in the blink of an eye.

Everyone use to know me
by my glowing smile
but now I am forgotten
for I haven't done it in a while.

Well things are different now
I must accept it and no longer cry
and to the life I use to know
I guess this is goodbye.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bria

    Damn really an truly i love ur poems

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Thanks for the comment on 'persecution'.

    Overall I think this is a very good poem. The rhymes seem to come naturally to you, however they are quite simplistic. A more mature rhyme scheme can improve a poem drastically.

    I watch the clock as time passes by
    all day wondering why
    amused by the way things change
    in the blink of an eye.

    This stanza has good content, but the structure is quite weak. The 1st and 3rd lines are long in comparison to the 2nd and 4th, making it slightly difficult to read.

    Although I've picked out the things I didn't like, I think that this poem IS very good. Nice work xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Raychil

    Wonderful poem. I can relate to it. You did a wonderful expression of emotion in this poem, I loved reading it. I hope things start getting better for ou. 5/5, great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow...amazing....i have felt like this...and everything i was feeling...you hit everything...i know how you feel...i loved it... Great Job...
    Emma 5/5

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